A cloudy lesson

Once upon a time when the clouds were shapes, there was a boy named Ben he was finally old enough to be a cloud blower. His grandfather took him up the mystical tower. The tower towered above the clouds into space. They went up the stairs which twisted around and around. When they got to the top they saw a metal bubble blower. 

Ben's grandfather showed Ben how to blow a cloud. "Whoosh" ,a shapeless cloud came out of the metal bubble blower. Then it was Ben's turn he. Heaved in a lot of air and blew out. Out came a tiny little cloud "woosh". Ben was disappointed. Then Ben's grandfather showed him how he took a deep breath and pushed the air out like a balloons air coming out. Ben try again but this time he put his mouth up to the hole and blew and blew and blew. Soon after that" CRACK "Ben had broken the cloud blower.

He was slowly going down down down SMASH it landed on the floor. Ben' grandfather helped Ben up , Ben was holding the squished cloud blower in his hands. When Ben's grandfather saw it he was disappointed, disheartened. Then Ben got an idea he fiddled and foddeled with it then he showed his grandfather it looked like a star. He blew it the out came a star it was the first time a non shapeless cloud came out. Everyone was super duper ultra mega happy. They blew shapes until sunset. Every one lived happily ever after. The End

The catch

Once upon a time there was a boy named Siva from a small village in the south. Siva had a green hat and white baggy pants; he also has a tiny bit of face paint. The village was in need of fish so they sent Siva to catch fish.

 Siva had only caught one he was very unhappy, when suddenly 'snap'! He got up and headed towards the sound he saw an orangey red fox caught in a trap. At first he hesitated then he cut the vine with his knife. The fox looked scared. Then when the fox was out suddenly the fox attacked him now he was scared. 

 The fox went to his fish and got it and went through the thorny bushes. Then it was Siva turn to go through the thorn bushes; leave his village. When he got through he had to climb up the tallest mountain in the continent. Half way there he lost his hat but he was determined. When he got to the top he went back down the other side;

 At the bottom he saw an ocean full of fish. He was amazed, he was happy. Then the fox gave him a stick to fish with. When he finished fishing he brought back all the fish and gave one to the fox. Then the fox disappeared in a fury of dust and ash. THE END

 

my reading reflection

I can use my knowledge of words to read better.

I can tune into words to use in my writing.

eg of words that are new:

annotate
effervesent
commarade
impecable
discontent
dictator
dispicable
indispiable
vowed
transmitting.

My writing goal refection

I have edited a lot of my work insted of none.

Like:
Reading reflection
Maths reflection
This
Some squiggle stories
Most of my posts

My maths goal reflection

my Maths Goal reflection

I have improved in my number bonds to 1000
because I have tested myself twice, on my first try I answered 10 questions in one minute and twenty two seconds.The second time I improved by 14 seconds i think you can work it out.

Clock tower writing

 The girl in the clock tower’s name was Lola. She had brown hair like silk and brilliant blue eyes. She was always wanted to go outside the clock tower. She wondered if anyone could save her. 

One month later a prince came to the tower searching for a bride. The prince's name was Andy, he had blond hair and dark brown eyes. He was a prince, engineer, dancer, magician and racer. He also had a knight named sir Fartsalot, ask for every girl in the town to come to his castle. 

A woman said that there was a beautiful girl in the tower. The prince wanted to go up the tower so he climbed up the 100 stairs without difficulty. And when he got to the top he saw her. He was awestruck, he just wanted to kiss her. He asked her why she couldn't go out of the tower, she said that her dress was a gear so if she stopped the town would stop and be lifeless. 

Then the prince had a wonderful idea; he went straight to the castle to find some metal, an electric box with a plug point and a gear. Then he went straight back at the speed of sound. When he got to the tower he told sir Fartsalot to bring the gear and metal. When they got to the top Andy powered up the electric box, then moulded the metal into a pole; he put the pole through the gear and plugged in the pole. He told Lola in a serious tone to get out of the gear place and put the pole in exactly where she was. So when she got out of her place the town froze, even Andy. 

So she put the gear in and poof! Everything around her came to life, she was overjoyed. 3 months later Andy and Lola were married. They all lived happily ever after.

Samoa

Here is my Samoan presentation on the History of Samoa.